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I'm hoping you aren't attaching a negative connotation with 'big deal'. Anyways, your reviewing was a big deal for me because each of your reviews displayed a good bit of depth. Yes it was formulaic, yes it was harsh at times, sometimes it focused on grammar, etc etc, but it is also a clear representation of your tenacity and competence.

You displayed a consistent level of reviewing and never went below a certain threshold so to speak. Some works, you reviewed with greater depth(for good reason), but rarely below this imaginary threshold that my mind has convinced that you sought to never go under.

Now, if you are referring to how you reviewed stuff in particular, I'll admit that I thought it was a bit detached. Objective, reasonable, cold. It comes off very rough at times, and the formula format only helps to create tension. But, I DO realize you were going through a massive number of works. Besides, everyone has their own way of reviewing and reading, who am I to say you are wrong? Because you certainly aren't, and I'm not accusing you of such either.

To Coffee, just chillax man, Xenon already beat the sense to us of the importance of the points you mentioned forth~

And I'm sorry if either of us here had posted a statement which offends you in one way or another.

If I decide to go Halloween, the deadline will be in 15 days. The make smaller.

A H-Scene between zombies and ghosts do sound nice~

Many kinky ideas are also there according to the theme too

Yeah. Dark, Halloweeen and perhaps Horror may be our theme.


That said, Coffee never really reviewed my work. :<

oh yeah, I forgot to revisit it; it's fixed right? I'll check in the coming days~

Yeah, it's fixed.

Anyway, here's some inspirational stuff for ya



It makes me really proud of having KQ 6 as the part of my childhood, I just recently replayed it until finish and loved it alot~

Totes lazy to stream.

Dun worry 'bout it, I just share it for the fun it's all optional~

Naw... I have read through the posts I made last week. I think it was the people who remarked about my avi and sig on the "Say something about the above user" thread. But, to tell you truth, my preference for less than aesthetically pleasing pictures is an attempt to be different, it is also an attempt at depicting myself and what I like on the Internet.

I would like to depict myself as someone or something ugly on the Internet. Because I feel that it resembles what life is. Life is not made up of perfect 2D characters but it is part of a very flawed world. I would like to celebrate that imperfection, warts and all.

I wasn't present yesterday because of school and it seems as if I have missed talking to Xenon, Coffee and Breaker. Now, that is a real shame. I would really like see how they would react to what I usually write.

I'm usually around, last week was an exception.

I'll just say that I can appreciate a good tongue-in-cheek satire, but it's a thin line when it stops becoming interesting for me. Your stuff is humorous, but mostly not my cup of tea. This is simply because of my personal tastes and not in reference to your skill in writing at all. I prefer writings that are very deep, somewhat mysterious, easily captivated, engaging with emotion, convey a lesson, are somewhat adventurous, and hopefully have the reader contemplating their own life's morals and ethics. You can see we might be polar opposite in our preference to writing in that regard. However, it doesn't stop me from respecting your works and your cesspit.

As long as you don't create a satire on the necessity for correct spelling and grammar so that you butcher it during the whole piece. That would drive me nuts.

Well Xenon, your preference is something that I actually look forward to write every time I tried to come up with something rather serious. But it seems like I could only limit my approach because of my inferior skills so I could only came up with simplistic motives, conflicts, and plot devices, it is a really stressful experience indeed trying to emulate a philosophical formula to my works as it mostly deviates from the common sense whenever I tried to make a sound attempt, it soon becomes an usual gimmick when someone came contact with my works~

Though there's one thing that interests me alot, which is the Character Development, on how you develop likeable characters with strong personality and motives, and developing them along the way, it's also intrigues me how the simple chemistry between the characters helps me out a lot in finishing up the chapters while I'm stuck on writing up things. I also find myself interested in the psychological aspect which serves as one of these standpoints while writing a story~

I could also relate on your post at the thread 'your motivation in writing' which kinda reminds me of how I write at times especially when things might turn out to be quite confessional to the point it's almost embarrassing when I tried to compose it on normal conditions

You should try to see if anything grand inspires you to write well thought out plots. There are a lot of elements that go into making a great story. It's what separates a tale from an epic. I think you should make another attempt soon and have in mind an epic to write. You do a good job already, but if you're not satisfied, then you need to push yourself enough so that you are. After all, it only matters when you are, or it should only matter when you are.

Character development is one of those main elements that go into a great story. You need to have a good understanding of human emotion and the mind of the characters that you are writing. That is why I try to place myself within the role of the character, because it makes it more personable and real. Additionally, we are not all psychologists, but we kind of have to play the part if we want to convey a genuine feel with our character's development.

When it comes to motivation, you just have to remember that you should write for you because that keeps it both genuine and unique. I can't tell you not to feel embarrassed when it's confessional, I simply don't feel embarrassed at all because I don't see disclosure as a significant matter. I simply do what I do and I can share it if requested. It keeps me genuine.

All that aside, you're a great writer, high, and you create great tales. Epics, even.

Inspirations eh, I have lots of those in mind but I think what matters now is how to put them out for a good use. Yes there's still many things I'm looking forward to write too. About pushing myself, I tend to do that a LOT of times because most of time I tend to be a lazy bum and slacking off whenever I tried to write something different than I usually were. Agreed with your point about the 'when', there's always the 'right time' to do things in order to make it turn out the best possible, it also implies the importance of not rushing when trying to compose the stuff =D

I also used the same concept when I tried to writing the chapters, I usually imagine myself as one of the characters as they interact with one another, mostly in order to create the enjoyment and level of immersion that I wanted. Though I can't call myself a psychologist (more like just a psycho) I find myself intrigued by it as you disclosed earlier.

Writing for myself? Hmmm...you got the point, I think most of time I tried to write in order to meet certain demands I set for myself on what I really wanted these pieces to turn out. Ah thanks for the encouragement, it lets me know that giving 'a bit much information' could sometimes have a boon by itself~

Thanks a lot Xenon, I still have a lot to learn in order to become an author I aspired to be. I think you also did a good job on all of your works here, so to say I'm also impressed, in addition of your capabilities as your author, is your devotion to this section which makes me thought, this place wouldn't be so developed if it weren't for you~

Xenon has inspired me too. I will someday write something in his honour, hopefully spelling and grammar related. On a more serious note, I can access the site through my phone but I am very uncomfortable using a phone to write. I am not going to write long stories or quote things but chatting is still quite possible.

Anyhow



I do find Borat as a very interesting inspiration, and I really enjoyed my time watching videos of him, go check up on his videos if you have time =D

I love how politically incorrect and racist Borat is. It is even more entertaining to see people being fooled into thinking that he is real. His accent is very unique and easily imitated. And I squeal upon reading Borat's English.
Cultural Learnings of America for Make Benefit Glorious Nation of Kazakhstan is a fine example. Wish I can write like that. Simply splendid!

Now... to show this to those who frequent the lounge...

Whoa, I also watched the movie and liked it alot but this is my first time hearing that it's adapted from a written work~