xninebreaker wrote...
Kirby just keeps dishing out more works! With his perseverance and some improvements on basic grammar and etc. I think he could be a real good writer. All that would be missing is creativity in forming a plot, but that can come over time~
If I were writing a story about princesses, I would plagarise the history books. You know, give those fairy tales a dark twist or begin mocking what princesses actually have to go through in history.
What comes to mind is marrying princesses off to barbarians or nomads. I hope they are the adventrous sort that loves living off the land and living in tents for the rest of their lives!
And of course, since we are in a pornographic site, let us up the ante by making things kinky! After the chieftain they are bethrothed to dies, those poor princesses have to marry their sons. I hope they are into paedophilla as well! Even better if the new chieftain is part of the
Moro
Islamic
Liberation
Front.
I don't know if you could count that as "creativity", but I prefer something different from what we usually read.
High: Speaking about character development, I think I'd prefer seeing well developed side characters that the main characters have to interact with to advance the plot, even better if the side characters are female and well developed, if you know what I mean.
If the characters whether main or minor go through character development, I'd think I need a reason to care about them.