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If you want me to write for your VN, like collaboration or anything. Just tell me. D;

Also, nice. I wish you the best of luck with that. Now we need patience because he takes time to reply.

Oh right the 200th page...

I could use any extra help, but for the least you can help me out as being a beta tester for my VN and give some feedback on it. I will be starting it out as Non-H because of the rules of regulations around here that kinda limits things with pornographic material~

And I think I might rephrase myself on writing for a VN Company lol, I might leave the writing to someone else that's more capable, who knows. But I need to seriously boost my leadership and management skills this time if I truly wanted to get ahead~

Sure, I can help you out with that too, I guess.

Also, good luck on your voice acting thing, I hope you will succeed in the future~

I've only heard one voice from Rise. Which I thought was his natural voice.

Have you practiced doing other voices?

I remember PumpJack was trying to get people together a while back to do voice acting and practice together.

Oh and just have to throw this out here: Jennifer Hale is the best voice actor ever in my opinion.

Other than me doing Yukiteru, protag of Stand-alone chapter of Nisekoi and that one teacher of whatever anime; not much, really. I haven't found any sort of actual inspiration to try out different types of voices.

And thanks, High.

Concerning voice acting, High has personally heard my voice and thinks that I should be an engineer. That is a lie though. And I kick myself at the fact that I have slept while we passed the 200th page.



Throwing this out to Neko-chan, do you think if anyone wants to read depressing and angry monologues? I am under the impression that women don't like them.

If there is a point to them. If it is just ranting then no. There has to be some point to it. A monologue does not have to ramble on - if you want to write about a lot of different things either break it up into different written pieces or make it all connect and fit together with a unifying theme.

In truth, people are more likely to read angry, depressing, and dark things then happy topics. People can debate and discuss the angry and the dark. You can't really debate or discuss happy topics.

Lastly, saying women in general don't like darker subjects isn't accurate in my opinion. It really depends on the subject matter. There are women issues, but most issues are universal and can relate to either gender.

I think what he's talking about is what he wrote for my Summer Writing Contest this year. Which is - mostly filled with - ranting.

There is a point to them though. I deluded myself into thinking that there is urgent need to tell the entire world that my summer is horrible for the most unjustified of reasons.

ED: Took the opportunity to run through the contents in the Cesspit. And it is indeed material worthy of a cesspit.

It was fine. It isn't actually depressing since it has a dark sense of humor to it. Also the observations and opinions are so absurd they are facetious so it doesn't seem too rant-like. One part of compliant is after the middle you start to get onto too many topics which makes it drag on in my opinion. The beginning was the better part of it style wise as I thought I was going down a Poe esque angst filled story about the drudges of your life. I do think that if you gave this story more of a motif and overall theme rather than, "This is a list of dark humorous observations I made", it would be better recieved by everyone.

Talk about establishing a company overseas by a talentless man with so little time as 6 months, this might be the most insane story I ever witnessed~

I call it, this is madness~

No, this is Sparta.

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Rants aside I just want to make the best use of the little time I had left for now. It might greatly help to use this advice from Warren Buffett

"It's not about aiming for the stars, it's about searching for a blockade low enough for you to easily walk through it."

That is wonderful feedback. And I meant that seriously.

I hope the organisers of the contest would not take it to heart, but I was trying to give a tongue in cheek response to the contest requirements which demand references to Fakku, what I have done in the summer and my favourite topic to mock -- romance.

ED: I have heard setting up a business here is easy. But whatever business it is, I am quite confident that you will to take it online, High.

Taking it online?

Yes. Online businesses. I have spoken to a relative of mine who tried a conventional business. His largest gripe is the rental, the business expense which is even worse than inventory depreciation. His next gripe is the inventory. All of your profits go into buying inventory which may or may not sell.

Inventory is a necessary evil, but you can circumvent your rental by going online.

Oh uhh,

yeah fuk u

i haet u bro gtfo

^ I feel as if I am in the Fakku cafe. Wonderful place! Everyone ignores me there for obvious reasons!

well what kind of business is it, and how did these things relate to when you're actually trying to establish a VN company?

I'm curious~