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d(^_^)(^_^)d wrote...
grimmwolf wrote...
I need to know how it ends forRyxor borx |3
I'll be posting the last chapters for Knife in the Dark tomorrow if not tonight.
My only comment for your story is,
It does a damn good job at keeping my attention |3
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grimmwolf wrote...
My only comment for your story is,It does a damn good job at keeping my attention |3
Well, glad to hear you like it. To be honest, I'm not entirely happy with how it's turned out. I'm not going to bother with a second draft, at least not anytime soon, but it could definitely use one.
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
Less than 10 days left in the competition, people. Don't let d and I walk away with all that dough without a fight.
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Xenon wrote...
Less than 10 days left in the competition, people. Don't let d and I walk away with all that dough without a fight.Lol, shut up.
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d(^_^)(^_^)d wrote...
Xenon wrote...
Less than 10 days left in the competition, people. Don't let d and I walk away with all that dough without a fight.Lol, shut up.
Don't worry, friend.
I'm right here, still in the competition.
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xninebreaker
FAKKU Writer
Xenon wrote...
Less than 10 days left in the competition, people. Don't let d and I walk away with all that dough without a fight.Ain't no way I'm letting ya get a free pass. My gauntlet shall be thrown in soon enough.
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I'm submitting a sentence to hear what people's interpretations are, because I really want to make this sentence very lucid.
Spoiler:
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The Logophile wrote...
I'm submitting a sentence to hear what people's interpretations are, because I really want to make this sentence very lucid.Spoiler:
It seems to me that you're trying to stuff too much into it. I don't necessarily mean that it should be split into two sentences. There's some information in there that I just feel is extra and should be deleted entirely.
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d(^_^)(^_^)d wrote...
The Logophile wrote...
I'm submitting a sentence to hear what people's interpretations are, because I really want to make this sentence very lucid.Spoiler:
It seems to me that you're trying to stuff too much into it. I don't necessarily mean that it should be split into two sentences. There's some information in there that I just feel is extra and should be deleted entirely.
I'll take that into consideration, but that's not what I meant when I asked for interpretation.
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The Logophile wrote...
I'll take that into consideration, but that's not what I meant when I asked for interpretation.Oh.
Unto her, the sound’s origin had been revealed:
This makes me think the source of the sound has popped out at her. When it's revealed to be a fox, I imagine it walking out toward her from around a corner. I get the image of a fluffy, fiery fox that's crackling like a campfire.
Is that more in line with what you wanted?
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d(^_^)(^_^)d wrote...
When it's revealed to be a fox, I imagine it walking out toward her from around a corner. I get the image of a fluffy, fiery fox that's crackling like a campfire.Is that more in line with what you wanted?
Yes, that's the kind of interpretation that I meant. Right at the moment, I'm particularly interested in how you picture the fur.
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The Logophile wrote...
Yes, that's the kind of interpretation that I meant. Right at the moment, I'm particularly interested in how you picture the fur.Pretty much like this but with fire.
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d(^_^)(^_^)d wrote...
The Logophile wrote...
Yes, that's the kind of interpretation that I meant. Right at the moment, I'm particularly interested in how you picture the fur.Pretty much like this but with fire.
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The image doesn't work for me, (though I've googled "winter red fox" and found nice fox pictures), but one last thing (and I do hope I haven't bothered you too much), I would like just little detail about how you imagine the fire/fur to be behaving/doing. If you can answer that, I will be 100% sated.
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The Logophile wrote...
The image doesn't work for me, (though I've googled "winter red fox" and found nice fox pictures), but one last thing (and I do hope I haven't bothered you too much), I would like just little detail about how you imagine the fire/fur to be behaving/doing. If you can answer that, I will be 100% sated.I picture the fire as a kind-of aura that surrounds the fox.
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
Because a lot of sites with images hate Fakku.
Stuff like Imgur, Pomf, Minus and shit works.
Stuff like Imgur, Pomf, Minus and shit works.
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Fallan
Kamen Rider Cheeki
Cinia Pacifica wrote...
Because a lot of sites with images hate Fakku. Stuff like Imgur, Pomf, Minus and shit works.
It's because Fakku killed the panda.
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
The Logophile wrote...
I'm submitting a sentence to hear what people's interpretations are, because I really want to make this sentence very lucid.Like it or not:
Spoiler:
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
Xenon wrote...
The Logophile wrote...
I'm submitting a sentence to hear what people's interpretations are, because I really want to make this sentence very lucid.Like it or not:
Spoiler:
lolyea