I also have the same opinion as Zafira for your first chapter, there is no real weakness in it. Just one input if you don't mind:
Let's assume not all readers know Japanese stuffs like 'Heian period' for example. It's nearly impossible for everyone to possess the knowledge of such thing. Therefore, it's much more preferable to be informative in your writing, even for just a tiny bit. Just like in fansubbing; making your viewers, or readers in this case, to open dictionary/google for an alien-ish term while reading your story is considered a sin. Here I am not telling you to reveal your main focus or further development in said choice, but at least you have to include a short teasing description to give us readers the reason to choose it.
However, it's safe to assume that every Touhou-related terms, like 'youkai' for example, is within their dictionary's entries. So you don't have to bother with that one.
In my opinion, you've done a great job for it, as explained in detail by Zufi. I'll be giving you other inputs again in time I manage to finish reading all of them.
Kagamin wrote...
Komeiji Satori no Jousou Kyouiku.
Well, actually the Satori game has a timer and efficiency score for the levels, so that could be used. But aside from that one, I don't know any other either.
Gotcha. I also have this game in my HDD, so I am quite familiar with its system.
Thanks for the suggestion, the game's been archived in the consideration list.
brok3n butterfly wrote...
Are you suggesting Rin uses such things? No idea on both accords. Just wanted a reason to play it again.
No, Rin used viagra to boost his skill. I don't think TSA is suitable for (non)competitive blast unless we find out the way to connect via build-in Network method.
brok3n butterfly wrote...
How about a low scoring event? The goal would be to time out every spellcard, ideally 1cc without ever bombing or shooting at anything. The score would end up as the total base score and any bonus (graze, auto collect, etc)
We've discussed things about pacifist run long ago, it didn't meet a good end. While the idea doesn't sound so bad at all, it does leave one question 'will it be frustrating?' with answer 'probably yes'. Imagine yourself in 4th stage PCB pacifist run, how would you deal with the enemies without shooting?
Zafhner wrote...
If a fangame was ever chosen for an event, which would you prefer it to be - bullet curtain or non bullet curtain?
Anything that doesn't belong in your field of expertise. Seriously speaking, I'd prefer a non bullet curtain ones. Variations mend a bored heart.
FreeOtakuGhost36 wrote...
i prefer to sing my own version of Renai Circulation than have to eat that diarrhea mess that you call food.
Stop thinking you're Gin-chan, Pattsuan. You are only Yorozuya's lovable cherry boy.