FAKKU Writers' Lounge

Diaries eh, for sure I will count it as a story, particularly those which blends non-fiction elements with fictional ones. And I do think many inspired-by-life stories to be my cup of tea too~

Hmm..it certainly is based upon my real life story but the details are mostly blurred out and I also adjusted some things to the point it starts to look fictional and absurd xD

A nice dumping spot indeed, good to find some interesting things, try inviting Antw0n or some other random guys who has the stories you like in order to contribute there, many interesting things might happen next~

May consider. It is very challenging inviting people from Incoherent Babbling to dump things into the Cesspit. Knowing them, they will dig something out from the Cesspit and fling it in my direction!

On another note, I have included my commentaries of you and GiantBeardedFace's contributions. As for the story I promised, I can only give a half completed rant at best by the end of this hour.

Yes indeed, as they might give out some things that might spark things out, though I do think that Ant's a pretty cool guy though, Artcellrox's also a nice person too in my book~

Okay then I'll check out on it~

And that said, I would really like to ask Pacifica if he is okay with a reference to Eternal Lover.

I want to say that it takes place in Japan Land and then pour a lot of cold water for it being too rosy and tragic at the same time.

It won't hurt to try asking him next time, I myself would be looking forward to it as I also like the original story too~

That aside, I like your commentaries on the recent pieces posted on the Cesspit, in one way or another it adds the touch of humor and further gave a stronger impression that all the pieces posted were meant to be satirical in nature with the strong undertone of dry humor xD

I liked Eternal Lover somewhat. I am not sure if you have read my remarks about it. Generally positive. But my Cesspit Entry targets stories like that of course in a tongue in cheek fashion:

To raise an example of what happens in Japan Land, consider rosy depictions of a Summer Festival, a term used by people who can't pronounce "Obon" or used by people who don't want to call the Festival for what it really is!

You read about people being dressed up as if they are in a Renaissance Festival or have forgotten that the Industrial Revolution actually happened.

You read about people somehow falling in love even though they are dressed primitively and are patronising roadside vendors that most likely serve diarrhoea inducing gunk!

And then they fall in love then one of them dies somehow and then I go get some teardrops, onions or some citrus fruit in a desperate attempt to make myself cry otherwise I will be a target of a witchhunt.

That would be an interesting example too, though you might want to add some twist like you know...some macabre stuff that kinda sparks 'Dada' in order to drive the impact meter to maximum~

Ahh... Maybe next year. I am not good with stories. I do know a lot about complaining and that is a favourite pasttime from where I come from. If I write something like that it would go:

1. I found a girl (online) which I didn't like at first sight.
2. I fell in love with her gradually as I got to know her.
3. Our first date during the Obon Festival ended up with her in the hospital.
4. Turns out she had an life-threatening illness that can' be cured.
5. We spent whatever time that is left for us together.
6. Then she died.
7. They did an autopsy. Turns out the 'she' was a 'he'.

Dadaism... It reminds me of the Bean sketches and anything else Rowan Atkinson was involved in before he became famous.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6Sf_pogZ8jE

The writeup is still half complete. I am at the part remarking how good the Japanese are at obfuscation and a reference to where I come from. I may take a rest and call it a day.

Oh I lol at the point No 7.

Brilliant twist, hats off for you~

Oh well, have a good night then =)

Feel free to leave a comment about my half completed work. In fact, I think it looks complete. I posted in the Fakku Cafe. Let's see what happens.

*trollface*

I could imagine the reactions of casual people while reading that, in any case...good job =_=b

Do you want me to perform an autopsy on you as well?

I'd glad cut your ribcage open while you're living and pull out everything with a fucking knife. >_>

Damn... there's this battle I'm so itching to write but it's still a loooooooong way until that part of the story.

Nah... I have to be dead in order to have an autopsy performed on me. You'd have to kill me first.

Speaking of writing, why not write the battle first then concentrate on the story?

I also got some battle scene in mind while writing the dr. Pervert story, but as I felt that the Arc are dragging too long to the point it feels a bit stale I decided to end it as peacefully as possible instead of dragging it too much, I don't want to turn the plot into some kind of generic shonen-manga stuff lol~

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Also, I'm thinking of making a thread about writing collaborations, someone's already made up about it many times before, but I'm kind of thinking about something different. Let's say we'll compile all of our collaboration works at that thread too~

It would be fun to see many people collaborating with each other to make a nice story, well that's just for me though~

That is very interesting idea. What would you like to see in a collabaration?

Nothing intentionally crazy for the sake of standing out due to the major difference, that's for certain.

Hmm...I think I just want the bonds of friendship to be formed through working with each other I guess~

It's nice to see people supporting each other, rather than being left out alone most of the time, it could also motivate ourselves to work with our separate projects by working with other people and supporting them to reach the same goal of completing a well-composed story~



Why do you think I'm always crazy lol

I'm just negating Leonard's really weird attempts at standing out while writing.

Ah I see xD

Anyways, in collaboration I'll try my best on acting as a medium for my partner's aspirations, and I'll suit my style in order to match theirs. I think in this case the chemistry between partners is more important than anything else~