leonard267 wrote...
It is the first entry of the Scenery of Tranquil Places isn't it? I took your piece of writing for some reason. Perhaps it is because I can relate to some of the emotions felt by the narrator or perhaps it is because I have already read it. El Chacal did something similar except that he decided to tell a story instead.
well it's not exactly the first chapter, but a part of the continuation from where I left out. it hasn't been posted here nonetheless =)
well yeah, it's from the same story so you can say that you've already read these. I'm really inept at coming up with plots, so to say, let alone something understandable. it eventually became so bland I mostly discontinued writing these stuff before I even finished it halfway lol
it would be different if there's nothing to be made sense of, and somehow everything could happen in there, no matter how absurd it is hahaha