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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
College and University has such differences though. D:
And welcome, Neko.
And welcome, Neko.
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pleasure to meet you Neko. ^^ I would very much like to read your future stories on the forum, or perhaps in a library :3
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
I wish my works would get in the library one day. D:
Inb4 someone opens a thread with my works with a computer from the library. xD
Inb4 someone opens a thread with my works with a computer from the library. xD
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
Almost done writing the actual story. Need to do lots of editing after I'm done completing too. It should be out tonight.
EDIT: https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?t=91691
EDIT: https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?t=91691
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Cinia Pacifica wrote...
Almost done writing the actual story. Need to do lots of editing after I'm done completing too. It should be out tonight.EDIT: https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?t=91691
Sweet, will read and comment later~
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
Someone said it's fast paced and is bad at the end.
Well, damn my ideas. >____>
Well, damn my ideas. >____>
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"Ahhhnnn...yes...please make me even wetter, Nee-chan."
I don't understand what the hell is she thinking about at the moment, but she seemed to hold her legs together like holding her bladder. And the expression of her face turns ecstatic like a kid who's been playing video games too much...
"Okay." I complied with her request and emptied my contents to her shirt, splashing my glass of water towards her.
The glass I'm holding is now empty, then I could see her shirt getting fully drenched to the point her undergarments are completely visible...
"H-hey...Emi...go change your clothes, you'll catch a cold!"
I don't understand what the hell is she thinking about at the moment, but she seemed to hold her legs together like holding her bladder. And the expression of her face turns ecstatic like a kid who's been playing video games too much...
"Okay." I complied with her request and emptied my contents to her shirt, splashing my glass of water towards her.
The glass I'm holding is now empty, then I could see her shirt getting fully drenched to the point her undergarments are completely visible...
"H-hey...Emi...go change your clothes, you'll catch a cold!"
I was like, where's the logic. . . People can't just do this in real world. But then I was like what the hell it's called fiction.
Hahahahaha xD
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Nah nothing, just reading a comment on my piece at another forum. It's an old comment but it still made me smile~
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Ok Rise I just skimmed some of the passages on the writings, well I don't know but this style isn't like you at all...tbh I tend to like your past works better duh~
It does seem to me like you want to copy a style of some really experienced writer when you already had, in my opinion, a better style suited to yourself~
It does seem to me like you want to copy a style of some really experienced writer when you already had, in my opinion, a better style suited to yourself~
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Well pardon me, it seems I've mistaken something...it's just a surprise for me that your way of writing had changed a lot from the last time I saw your works~
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Yeah I know, you've done a good job in the wording I think~
Though the wall of text kind of doze me off, I might have to copy it to my Open Office and break down the structure myself in order to digest the story~
Still judging from the Plot, it does feel like your usual stuff..seems interesting so far =)
Though the wall of text kind of doze me off, I might have to copy it to my Open Office and break down the structure myself in order to digest the story~
Still judging from the Plot, it does feel like your usual stuff..seems interesting so far =)
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
Post regarding it in that thread please. Because it feels lonely there. D:
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xninebreaker
FAKKU Writer
I put a lot of time and effort when I review it. Your work is no exception! I only just got through a couple today... and man, Xenon's took some serious thought.
I'll get to yours soon Rise!
I'll get to yours soon Rise!