Writing Section Etiquette I have noticed a few things that consistently happen in this section that I would like to address and hopefully allow the forum to grow and improve.
Note that these are not the official ru…
How To Improve As A Writer (v2) In this thread, I hope to gather the many voices of Fakku, and with their help create a list of advice to help us all improve our craft as writers.
On Grammar, Punctuation, & Usage Welcome. This topic was created for the purpose of aiding writers with grammar, punctuation, usage, and whatever else they may need, and will essentially be a relatively thorough explanation of gramma…
How To Improve As A Writer In all seriousness, this topic has me thinking again on serious writing, and drawing for that matter as it is also a creative outlet. I used to do much of both but lately the only writing I've done ha…
The Mistress of Snow ; Chapter 02. This is the series of 'The Mistress of Snow' a story which was written for the 'Seasonal Writing Contest', I always planned and wanted to turn it into a series so here it is.
Edit: The tit…
Valentines Contest - Kool D.'s Story Follow Me
I was sitting on the corner of the street, watching the wheels spinning freely. I was waiting for the bus to come. Bored of the normal life I live. I was in a rut, a supreme case…
Useful Tool Seeing as how the sub-forum has experienced the explosion of activity, I feel that I should notify the forum at large to a particularly useful tool, typewith.me.
This site is great for wri…
Flashback The problem that most stood out to me were the myriad of adverbs used, though it thankfully tapered after the first paragraph. Sure it helps to note that everything happened or was executed in a certa…
[V-day] - Lasting Memory Well...it doesn't feel quite right. A no more than 30 second meeting (not even a meeting, more like staring) can get you so worked up all your life? I'd say I do have moments like this, but the memory…
9 Years to Elysian (Discontinued) I enjoyed reading it, which was well written and the vast varieties of that vocabularies used adds the spice to the entertaining read. May I ask on what point did the Valentine's theme develop, or was…
Rainy Day @neko: lol indeed. I tend to look at a character's self (for a lack of better word) and judge it based on that.
@xenon: i understand what you mean, but it's slightly wrong. i didn't feel p…
Valentine's Day Writing Contest Entry I guess I have bring out the teacher side in me (again).
I cannot grade this as a story, for what I believe it to be is the description of one scene, over a short period of time. An descri…
Walking Shadow @Lofulamingo: 'Mengimbau kenangan lama,hati terasa riang dan ceria' is Malay and it means 'Looking old memories,heart felt cheerful and happy'
[V-Day] Unnamed This is actually pretty good. But I think the meaning strays at least once because you want to make the rhyme fit. And I feel that if you want to make it a rhythmic poem, do so for all of the stanza. …
A Promise till The end V-day Contest I won't say my grammar is good, but this is pretty bad as well.
I think we all need to edit our first draft like crazy before we can post anything on here. Sorry, I didn't read your story entir…