Writing Section Etiquette I have noticed a few things that consistently happen in this section that I would like to address and hopefully allow the forum to grow and improve.
Note that these are not the official ru…
How To Improve As A Writer (v2) In this thread, I hope to gather the many voices of Fakku, and with their help create a list of advice to help us all improve our craft as writers.
On Grammar, Punctuation, & Usage Welcome. This topic was created for the purpose of aiding writers with grammar, punctuation, usage, and whatever else they may need, and will essentially be a relatively thorough explanation of gramma…
How To Improve As A Writer In all seriousness, this topic has me thinking again on serious writing, and drawing for that matter as it is also a creative outlet. I used to do much of both but lately the only writing I've done ha…
Annnd theeeeeennnn? Ok, so this thread is a and deennn story type thing.
I'll post a paragraph or whatever, then next person posts one, and so on.
Rule/s:
-Must stay in 3rd person, past tense. <…
Devil's perspective It's a normal day in hell. Weather forecast is a storm of magma raining forth from what should be a sky but is not a sky, with a belching sound. Waterlogged as usual, not with water but with the usual…
Flow Trying to formulate a story as quickly as possible to test rushed cohesion. Comments appreciated, welcomed, and encouraged. Now then it is 12:47 right now here in Illinois and I'm gonna get going on t…
Poems from my high school days These were poems that I dug up/written from high school, give or take 2 or 3 years before.
Criticisms are welcome. (even the negative ones.)
"Hour of …
Faery Fornication This is loosely based off of a book (Wicked Lovely)that inspired the concept, and the characters and lemon just came to me later. This is my first time postng so tel me if I made any mistakes. This wi…
Paradise Lost This is one of my short-stories I wrote in Italian for a website. I'm posting it here translated in English.
Let me know what you think about it.
Warning: yuri inside.
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[Contest Entry] An Otaku's Christmas Carol It's really been too long since I've created a story. Well, whether it's crap or not, I'm pretty much doing this for the fun of it. Truthfully, I'm going over the word count, cause I really want to fi…
What is my name again? To leave this place
Is what I wish
To move away...
From all the pain
It hurts so much
What place do I have to call
"Home"?
No one is here
How many tears…
Drowned In Solitude Yet another text I wrote some months ago. This one was written in a different way than the other two, and is much longer. This one ain't misanthropic like the other two, but it ain't very happy. Anywa…
(untitled) Non - H This piece is not inherently bad in any way, but it is being weighed down by its structure, both wholly and when broken down into sentences.
You have numerous run-ons and fragments, along …
Lay Me Down I'm going to sleep soon, and I don't know when I'll wake up. I don't know when I'll want to wake up. My waking world is a nightmare; those around me cast me aside. I've been stripped of my worth--stri…
[Contest Entry] I Am My Own Santa Here is my second entry!
PLEASE NOTE:
--Some changes might have been made.
--Words like Kwagrrr and spshh are sound effects.
--According to Microsoft Word 2007, the word count …
Not sure file Sorry, still learning where everything is on FAKKU!, my boyfriend is the master on the laptop and knowledge of FAKKU!
but I have question to those who read my work. I have a new lemon that I wan…
[Contest Entry] Everyone Has Their Own North Pole Everyone Has Their Own North Pole
This is a story about a man with a distinctly disfigured figure encompassing a very obvious spot on his body. Let’s just call
Chained Up Some of the same issues I saw with the previous one: typos scattered and a few missing words, also meaningless plurals put in, oddly. But it was erotic nonetheless. I find bondage scenes more enjoyabl…
Bad Luck 10 minute free-writing exercise, so apologies if it's erratic.
I loved her. It's easy to say now because I lost her, but I loved her. Our lips never met and we rarely hugged, b…
[Contest Entry] The Great Hentai Heist I thought this was great. Hilariously great. Like epic movie great, especially with the ending so purposely abrupt to fit in a nice bit of delicious lemon. A for America, president Cleveland.